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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD SPEND THEIR FREE TIME WITH FAMILY, RATHER THAN GO TO ENTERTAINMENT ACTIVITIES OUTSIDE THE HOUSE. SOME DISAGREE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINIONS.

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Some people opine that the young people should spend their spare
time
 with family while others think that they should enjoy by going out with friends. In my opinion, adults should spend free
time
 with their family. On one hand, In
this
 competitive world, each and everybody is working dawn to dust to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the necessity of life and climb a career ladder.
Becuase
Suggestion
Because
 of
this
, they are unable to give sufficient
time
 to their family.
This
 leads to
generation gap
Suggestion
the generation gap
 between the elder and young people. So, whenever adults get
time
Suggestion
the time
 they should utilize with their family members.
This
 is just a way to show the gratitude and appreciation to parents who raised them. Apart from that, spend quality
time
 with family one can release the stress, can teach their
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 as well as discuss some crucial topics regarding changes in
family
Suggestion
the family
families
.
Consequently
,
this
 will strengthen the family relationships and give them a meaningful life.
On the other hand
, one school of thought
believe
Suggestion
believes
 that the only way to dilute the stress after the hectic week is going out with friends and have a fun. According to that, going out without family make them feel more relaxed. For an example, in some countries, it is a
commen
belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public
common
 trend that people prefer to go out after the
friday
the sixth day of the week; the fifth working day
Friday
 night. To recapitulate, young people always have confusion between family and friend to spend their spare
time
. From my point of view, they
should spent
Suggestion
should spend
 free
time
 with their family.
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