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You have lost your student identification card. This has caused some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter, -advise them of your situation -explain how it is affecting you -request a new card

#student #identification #card #director #services #-advise #situation #-explain #-request
Dear Sir, I am
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first
-year student of your college. I want to draw your attention
about
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 my missing student identification
card
 which I had lost yesterday.
Last
 time, I was in the library and
then
 I headed back
to
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apply
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home. Today, when I was filling the form for
final
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 examination and the receptionist requests
for
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the identity
card
. I was shocked, I did not have it. I searched everywhere like in the library, in the classroom, and even I confirmed from my friends. Unfortunately, I did not get it. As you know, the final exams are about to come. Without
identity
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card
, I will not be permitted in the examination hall.
Therefore
, I will not able to give the
first year
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 paper. So, I am anxious about it. It is a humble request in front of you, kindly provide me
a
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new student identity
card
 as soon as possible. So that, I can fill the form and submit it on time. I will be grateful to you for
this
 kind of act. Looking forward
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 your prompt reply. Yours Sincerely, Eric
Submitted by Navpreet Kaur on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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