In many Countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the action of inhaling and exhaling the smoke of the tobacco or drug is considered as a crime at the present time for that reason

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activity is prohibited by many nations’ governments’ around the world.

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essay completely agrees with

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statement because smoking the cause of many health problems and it create an

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pollution

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. The act of smoking injures our fitness the reason for

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the cigarette is one kind of poison for human beings anatomy.

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, it is creating a complication in respiratory process and might be possible to cause a lung cancer.

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, By the survey of Indian government’s Medical department at 2009 in that 80% people were addicted

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smoking tobacco or Drugs, Compared with 60% men and women has suffered with health problems like Lung cancer, asthma, tuberculosis,

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continuing in the same way

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So, if governments of many united are

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on smoking in public place.

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, It is completely

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encouraging or approving or pleasing

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and valuable decision. Smoking is one of the major

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reasons

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pollution

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at public places because, The activity of exhaling the smoke of

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a cigar

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the air, then

the air then

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will mix with normal

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and create a pollute

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very harmful

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human being as well as trees

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, Report of 2009 by the

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control department of Gujarat, declared 20% people have suffered

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air pollution problems

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problem at railway station, parks, Bus station, etc. So, prohibited smoking at public places by authorities’ of states, It is good for the people.

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, For kids and senior citizens

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who has allergy with smoking the smoke. In conclusion, according to my view that

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

302 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

secondhand smoke
prevalence
respiratory issues
environmental pollution
litter
healthcare costs
smoking-induced illnesses
encourage smokers to quit
public health improvement
justified
public spaces
exposure
non-smokers
inconvenience
younger populations

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