Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other believe it is a good to have who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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The relationship

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may be a good friendship as long as friends have always the same opinion.

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, some think is better that friends have opposite opinions. In

this

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essay, I will discuss both points of view.

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, I believe

that is

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better to have friends with approaching tastes. Each person has a different way of thinking regards to a same topic or situation.

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, they act in different ways which may be good or bad actions.

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, some believe stealing is a form

work whoever

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work, whoever

does it

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does, it

is a good person.

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, if their friends

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think

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is bad action

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action is bad

they should call the police up.

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, they would not be friends due to would think that for fault

theirs

of them or themselves

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own friends they are in the jail.

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, I think that there are people with similar personalities who have the same habits.

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this

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kind of people tend to build a good friendship for learning together. I am going to illustrate that with two examples.

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, if there is a group of friends with the same dream, become a manager,

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they could create a new company to develop their goals.

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, if two friends like to play tennis

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they would go to play tennis every weekend to improve their way of playing. To conclude, everyone

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their friends like

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to want which can be friends with similar thought or friends with

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the opposite point

an opposite point

of view. In my opinion, everyone should choose their friends with similar dreams, habits and personalities.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

257 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

bond
support
unconditional love
shared values
mutual understanding
trust
emotional well-being
interdependence
societal norms
companionship
loyalty
advice
experiences
mentorship
trustworthy
reliable
reliable
cherish
strengthen
deepen
attach importance to
prioritize

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