You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter because I have had a problem with the Linking Words
refrigerator
that I bought in your store. I tried to solve calling on the phone, but Use synonyms
none
action to solve my problem was taken.
When I arrived at home with the Correct quantifier usage
no
refrigerator
I turn on but it does not work, the light turns on but just Use synonyms
this
, nothing more work I tried everything but nothing works. I called Linking Words
to
the assistance and they said to call Change preposition
apply
to
you because past just a few days that I bought. I saw some video on the internet to see if was something in my home but others Change preposition
apply
was
complaint Change the verb form
were
with
the same problem.
I do not know what I need, please help me I really need Change preposition
about
this
Linking Words
refrigerator
and my family is getting a difficult living without a Use synonyms
refrigerator
. I will really be happy if you contact me.
Best Regards
JhonesUse synonyms
Submitted by jhones.goncalves on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite