Nowadays people are using more consumer goods like refrigerators or washing machines.Does this have more advantages over disadvantages?
In
this
contemporary era, the use
of latest electronic machines like refrigerators or washing machines is very common. There is also
an increase in the use
of these machinery
. Suggestion
machines
However
, I believe that it have
much more Suggestion
has
merits
over demerits. Suggestion
merit
This
essay is an attempt to explain the advantages and disadvantages of use
of consumer goods.
Suggestion
the use
Firstly
, the use
of consumer goods had made our lives easier than before. In the past, if we had to wash the cloths
we had to wash it with our clothing in general
clothes
bare hands which
is quiet difficult for everyone. Suggestion
bare hands, which
Moreover
, it take
too much time to dry the Suggestion
takes
has taken
cloths especially
during the winter months. Accept comma addition
cloths, especially
However
, nowadays not only the cloths are being washed themselves but
Accept comma addition
themselves, but
also
they are being drying
themselves and very fast. Suggestion
are drying
are dried
Additionally
, when we need a cold water or when we have to freeze something or when we want to get an instant ice we can get easily from the refrigerator. I believed that if these things were not made then
our lives would would be very difficult.
Secondly
, we are too dependent on these types of consumers
goods. Suggestion
consumer
consumers'
For instance
, if these goods gets
broke or not Suggestion
get
working
Accept comma addition
working, then
then
we can't do any work ourselves. However
, these types of machines are quiet expensive and have a limited life. In addition
, it is quiet
dangerous for children.
To conclude that, these machineries had much more benefit than demerits. to a degree (not used with a negative)
quite
However
, I believe that these things are made for the convenience for
the peopleSuggestion
of
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