Nowadays people are using more consumer goods like refrigerators or washing machines.Does this have more advantages over disadvantages?

In
this
contemporary era, the
use
of latest electronic machines like refrigerators or washing machines is very common. There is
also
an increase in the
use
of these
machinery
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machines
.
However
, I believe that it
have
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has
much more
merits
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merit
over demerits.
This
essay is an attempt to explain the advantages and disadvantages of
use
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the use
of consumer goods.
Firstly
, the
use
of consumer goods had made our lives easier than before. In the past, if we had to wash the
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
we had to wash it with our
bare hands which
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bare hands, which
is quiet difficult for everyone.
Moreover
, it
take
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takes
has taken
too much time to dry the
cloths especially
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cloths, especially
during the winter months.
However
, nowadays not only the cloths are being washed
themselves but
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themselves, but
also
they
are being drying
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are drying
are dried
themselves and very fast.
Additionally
, when we need a cold water or when we have to freeze something or when we want to get an instant ice we can get easily from the refrigerator. I believed that if these things were not made
then
our lives would would be very difficult.
Secondly
, we are too dependent on these types of
consumers
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consumer
consumers'
goods.
For instance
, if these goods
gets
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get
broke or not
working
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working, then
then
we can't do any work ourselves.
However
, these types of machines are quiet expensive and have a limited life.
In addition
, it is
quiet
to a degree (not used with a negative)
quite
dangerous for children. To conclude that, these machineries had much more benefit than demerits.
However
, I believe that these things are made for the convenience
for
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of
the people
Submitted by Umair Shaheed on

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