Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Being successful in the field of education plays an important role in the life of the human beings. Some people ponder that behind a successful undergraduate there is a powerful trainer while others reckon that students

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hard work

is more significant to get prosperity in field of study.

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, I completely agree with the former view,

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a good teacher is responsible for the favourable outcomes

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the junior, children

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must do

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to get more achievement. Why a benevolent adviser plays a significant role behind the best outcomes of a scholar. Primarily, a coach teaches the whole class and transfer his or her best knowledge from the depth of the books to the students.

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he or she is responsible for the best results for his or her class because students spend most of their time in schools from primary level. Teachers are well known with the abilities of the each pupil of their class. They always do the hard work and polish their students to get maximum grades in their examinations.

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, a good teacher always motivates their students to achieve higher qualification, a better career and how get overcome from obstacles in the life.

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kind of motivation always guide them a shows them a right path to achieve benefit.

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, some people argue that children can get successfulness only by their own

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hard work

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, if the children are not serious about their best grades and they always waste their useful time into other activities

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as watching television, playing games et cetera

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they the role of a good mentor will be nothing for them.

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, junior's own

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hard work

and self practise is

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so important to get high scores because their own passion towards best outcomes will give them fame. To sum up,

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, a good guide is able to turn a stone into a diamond because they always do

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the hard work

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and motivate their students to achieve better in their life, students

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do their best in their studies to earn maximum progress.