Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A few mothers and fathers believed that, the daycare is a good option for their kids’ education. While other parents feel that grandmothers and grandfathers are given better
care
for their teenagers. I think the baby
care
centre is a good option for little kids, but
care
given by family members they are much better for adolescents’. Some parents would be argued that, the pre-schools’ are much beneficial for their babies. The reason for behind it, these learning centres are providing all basic facilities for the kids.
Furthermore
, at the current time the latest nurseries are having advance teaching skill
,
Accept space
,
especially for little kids as well as the babysitting facility. So, children can learn basic skills and discipline in the
child
care
centres.
For example
,
last
month survey of the education department of Gujarat, in metro cities 80% parents are in the favour of sending his little babies into pre-primary schools and they are believed that the
child
care
centres are best for their kids up-bringing. So, I think it is good for pupils. While other guiders would be thinking that adolescents
care
taken by their family members are more valuable than others. The reason behind it, many working parents are
also
worried about their young
child
behaviour’s. In
this
situation they
are
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are also agreeing
also agree
are also agreed
also
agree and fully trust on their elder family members for their young boy’s or girl’s up-brings. These family members
also
given a good
guidelines
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guideline
and
care
about their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and disciple as well as learn a lesson for how differentiate between right things and wrong things and these
child
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children
will become more ritual and they know very well family values.
For instance
, by the Report of the times of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
newspaper’s in 2020, the figure was described more than 75% working mothers and fathers was feeling
they
of them or themselves
their
teenagers are
stay
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staying
with family members are more better and
valuable
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valuing
them. So, according to my opinion, I am completely favourable with that statement. In conclusion, I
am agree
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agree
am agreeing
have agreed
with that the older family members like, uncle, aunty, maternal grandparents or grandparents are given a better
care
and teaching a right
things
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thing
to young children.
although
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Although
, the day
care
centres are a good for children for learning stage teaching.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • structured environment
  • professional care
  • developmental stages
  • cognitive development
  • physical development
  • social development
  • social interaction
  • communication skills
  • teamwork
  • community belonging
  • personalized care
  • affectionate care
  • family bonds
  • emotional security
  • transmission
  • family values
  • traditions
  • pedagogical methods
  • child psychology
  • flexibility
  • educational development
  • social skills
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