When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I agree with
this
statement because now a day
every one
all people
everyone
is considering about
salary
.
if
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If
salary
is less no one is
intrested
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
to
work
.Now a
days
Suggestion
day
in internet we can see people are searching
job
on the basis of
salary
.Some people are taking
gratuation
the successful completion of a program of study
graduation
on some subject and working in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
field. Past years people
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
so loyal and they
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
doing
job
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the job
a job
for
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to
their
satisfation but,
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satisfaction, but
satisfaction but,
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
people are so lazy and they need to get
high paid
Suggestion
a high paid salary
salary
.
Also people
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Also, people
are having
consept
an abstract or general idea inferred or derived from specific instances
concepts
like if
salary
is less their status will affect.We
canot
can not
cannot
can't
blaim
an accusation that you are responsible for some lapse or misdeed
blame
people so much because we required so much money to raise a family
.
Accept space
.
we
Suggestion
We
have to pay the rent
,
Accept space
,
children's school fees and home monthly
expences
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
expense
experiences
.Now a
days
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day
if one person
is only working
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only works
means he will not able to satisfy
everyones
all people
everyone
needs. So
salary
is
important cosideration
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an important consideration
important consideration
for
job
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a job
the job
because if you are not
satisfiend
filled with satisfaction
satisfied
with the
salary
we will not able do loyal
work
for the company.If we are not doing loyal
work
we will not able to achieve company needs.If
its
the thing named or in question
it
happen
Suggestion
happens
like that so the person
willn't
would not
wouldn't
able to continue his
work
so it is better to choose a
job
according to their needs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consideration
  • sole factor
  • financial stability
  • security
  • motivating factor
  • dissatisfaction
  • demotivation
  • job satisfaction
  • overall well-being
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • flexible working hours
  • vacations
  • career growth opportunities
  • skill development
  • advancement
  • determining factor
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