The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart provides information regarding the
people
of Edmonton use transport
- car
, LRT, Bus, Taxi
for their travel; and the table Correct word choice
and Taxi
show
why Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
people
use the
Correct article usage
apply
car
as their transport
in their city. The data's
in both the pie chart and table are calibrated into a percentage.
Change noun form
data
Overall
, Most people
prefer a car
; it made up the most significant transport
, having almost half of the overall
percentage: almost more than half of the people
use this
transport
for their commute to work. Both Bus
and Fix the agreement mistake
Buses
taxi
, Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
however
, have been used by very
least Correct article usage
the very
people
in
their journey.
Change preposition
on
Car
accounted for 45%, becoming the most used transport
in Edmonton. This
was followed by LRT with just a 10% difference, having 35%. The third
position was given to bus
and Fix the agreement mistake
buses
taxi
, and both contributed the same proportion of 10%.
Moving to the table, Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
Correct article usage
the Commute
Commute
to work is the Wrong verb form
Commuting
reason
placed by more than half of the people
(55%). The second
most reason
which accounted for 45% in
Business. There is just a 5% difference between the Change preposition
of
reason
for business and taking children to school. Surprisingly, People
give a reason
for using a car
for their purpose of shopping and leisure activities with the same percentage of 15%.Submitted by Pavansai Vemula on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, car, transport, reason with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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