You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear
Mr.
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Eliott, I am writing to inform you that I won't be able to continue your management course
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this
semester due to my busy work schedule. Let me explain my situation in
further
details
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and let you know why I took
this
halfheartedly decision.
Firstly
, as you may know, I am on
work-study
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permit for
this
semester, so the university council has already scheduled a mandatory part-time job at the library.
Therefore
, I am basically 20 hours working there, which I enjoy but it doesn't give me much of a good salary to pay all my bills.
Secondly
, living as a student here in the city is quite expensive,
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I signed up
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a full-time job that pays a large salary to cover all my expenses and
also
gives me a large wage to save for the
next
semester.
Finally
, before announcing
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that I will drop your course, I already asked if you will be having the same management class for
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fall
2021
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, and thankfully the class will be still ongoing, so I will sign up for it. I am hoping you will understand my circumstances, and I am asking you if you would allow me to drop
this
course without counting it as a failed class. Please,
Mr.
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Eliott let me know how you intend to resolve
this
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a reply from you soon. Yours sincerely, Fatima Ezzahra Chouki
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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