There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to draw
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an
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attention to a situation which we have been facing
since
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couple
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of weeks. We live in Abuhalifa. The
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route to our area to the city centre is very busy and used by
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of passengers. The
bus
frequency is good to manage during
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peak hours. Unfortunately, we have noticed that the
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timings have been changed. Due to
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, currently, we are not getting the
bus
on time.
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the
bus
comes from
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stop
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full of passengers.
Therefore
, the driver did not stop the
bus
at our stop.
Furthermore
, I would like to inform you that our district has a dense population and due to
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of sufficient
bus
service; it gets overcrowded during office time. We are daily getting late to our offices due to
this
concern. Many people use private transport which is not the cheapest option at all. In order to solve the problem, I would like to propose
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some options.
First
of all, the
bus
service should start from our stop.
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stop will be from our field and
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one to
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centre.
Secondly
, you need to divert some of the buses to our range during peak hours. You could
also
provide some double Decker buses to our route to manage passengers. I would request you to look into
this
matter and resolve our problem at the earliest. If it problem
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solved, I may accelerate the issue to
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authority. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anand
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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