There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to draw

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an

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attention to a situation which we have been facing

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of weeks. We live in Abuhalifa. The

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route to our area to the city centre is very busy and used by

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of passengers. The

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frequency is good to manage during

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peak hours. Unfortunately, we have noticed that the

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timings have been changed. Due to

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, currently, we are not getting the

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on time.

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the

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comes from

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stop

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full of passengers.

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, the driver did not stop the

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at our stop.

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, I would like to inform you that our district has a dense population and due to

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of sufficient

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service; it gets overcrowded during office time. We are daily getting late to our offices due to

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concern. Many people use private transport which is not the cheapest option at all. In order to solve the problem, I would like to propose

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some options.

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of all, the

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service should start from our stop.

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, the

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stop will be from our field and

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one to

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centre.

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, you need to divert some of the buses to our range during peak hours. You could

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provide some double Decker buses to our route to manage passengers. I would request you to look into

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matter and resolve our problem at the earliest. If it problem

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solved, I may accelerate the issue to

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authority. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anand