Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages.

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At the present time, most of the foods that are
purchased these
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purchased, these
days in small markets as well as supermarkets have chemicals in them as these are used to improve the production and ensure the
food
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lasts for longer.
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, these chemicals have harmful effects. I believe that the potential dangers
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of
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are greater than the benefits receive. The most of the
food
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contains the large amount of chemicals are very harmful for people. Due to
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chemical, people
suffers
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suffer
from the major illness and many dangerous diseases. To elaborate
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, the
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contains
maximum proportion
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the maximum proportion
of chemicals and it is very unhealthy for individuals. Majority of additives in the
food
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may lead to headache, weakness and difficulty in breathing.
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, health effects
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depend on the toxicity of the chemical that has entered human body. Some chemicals are very toxic in small amounts and others are only toxic in large amount.
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, many companies claim those
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additives are safe and they have research to support
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, the research is quite possible based as it comes from their own companies or people with connection of these companies.
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, all the foods are not healthy, which available in the market. Nowadays it is common to read reports in the press about possible links to various health issues
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as cancer.
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additives have
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been linked to problems
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as hyperactivity in children.
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, the main benefits of the chemicals are placed in
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for the companies.
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, it is to improve the product to the eye, and
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is achieved via the use of
colorings
a digestible substance used to give color to food
colourings
, which encourage people to purchase the
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, that may be not look tempting to eat. To add to
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, much of the
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we eat would not actually
last
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that long if it is not contain the chemical, so again
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is the advantage to the companies that sell of
food
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as their products have a longer shelf life. To conclude, despite that face that there are benefits to placing the chemicals on
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. I believe that
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principal help the companies bit could be
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dangerous
to the public. It is unlikely that
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practice can be stopped so
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must be clearly
labeled
bearing or marked with a label or tag
labelled
and it is my hope that organic products will come more readily available at reasonable to all.
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