Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change, others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large business can make a difference. Discuss both views and opinions.

#people #individuals #climate #change #action #governments #business #difference

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

People have different views about whether to prevent global warming should be done by individuals or solely the government have much effort to tackle with

this

Linking Words

issue. Personally, I find the former more convincing, because the public contribution is more relevant. On the one hand, it is believed that the government and businesses can adjust global climate change by doing some affairs.

First

Linking Words

of all, only the government

have

Suggestion

has

legislative power and with

this

Linking Words

way they are able to challenge people to be economically –friendly. If it is not controlled, the results will be insufficient.

Secondly

Linking Words

, global scale conundrums require a large amount of money that the governments and businesses can afford to provide with

such

Linking Words

massive founds.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, every individual can help to prevent climate change by

doing

the act that results in something coming to be

making

small contributions which may lead to positive consequences.

For instance

Linking Words

, if people do not throw litter everywhere, it will reduce the amount of waste.

Also

Linking Words

, disposing of waste correctly, which means putting glass, plastic, bottle and paper into individual rubbish bins for recycling may protect the environment from air contamination, leading to lower temperatures.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, reforestation is another way in which people can contribute greatly.

In other words

Linking Words

, planting at least 2trees per year by every adult may reduce CO2 by releasing oxygen.

This

Linking Words

, in

turn will

Accept comma addition

turn, will

have

positive impact

Suggestion

a positive impact

on preventing global climate change. In conclusion, despite having much effort

Suggestion

the governments and businesses for protecting the environment, the public conduct is more relevant and helpful.

Submitted by eryigitovaruxsora on Sun Jul 19 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

9
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

250 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
It is often suggested that with the ever-rising use of the internet to broadcast news, newspapers will eventually become outdated. This essay will agree with this statement because of how convenient it is to use online sources as well as the variations available to the public.
4.5
band
People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
In contemporary era, citizen have dreamed of living in a impeccable civilization, but then most of the time fail in making this happen has become a broad issue to the general public. For me this problem can be solved the following essay will clarify
4.5
band
The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.
In recent times, the production of consumer goods has been rapidly increasing, leading to the harmful effects on the environment.This essay agrees that art and culture is a unique identity of the nation and government must allocate some funds to preserve them.
6.5
band
Marriages are bigger and more expansive nowadays than in the past. Do the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages?
Weddings today are more extravagant and costly compared to those in earlier times. While there are some drawbacks, such as cost implications and emotional stress, I believe the main benefits, for instance, memorable experiences, are more substantial.
5
band
Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
There is an ongoing controversy between scientific researchers and animal conservationists about the use of animals in experimentation stage in discoveries. Although there is some ethical and moral issues underlying animal experiments, because of the lack of methods that scientists can use, there is no other way from them to not experiment on animals.

Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change, others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large business can make a difference. Discuss both views and opinions.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.

Marriages are bigger and more expansive nowadays than in the past. Do the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages?

Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?