Human activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans cannot stop damaging the planet where as other believe that we can alter our behaviour and future damage.

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Nowadays, major

human actions are affecting badly to the

environment

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From the perspective of some people, the damage done by humanity is endless.Others,

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think that if people control harmful actions

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they can tackle issues and prevent them.Personally, I find the latter more convincing. Those who support the idea of irreversible damaging have their own justifications.

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of all, the harmful changes that are taking place are not always related to human

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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they might be natural.

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it is their opinion that the natural disasters

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as floods,

eartquakes

shaking and vibration at the surface of the earth resulting from underground movement along a fault plane or from volcanic activity

earthquakes

earthquake

, tornadoes, eruptions may harm the condition of the planet more than us

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humans.

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those kind of terrible events

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kills

on average 60 thousand people per year

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gloabally

throughout the world

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, today more and more people are indifferent to the cleanliness of the

environment

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, which means that their attention to cleanliness has declined.

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, in the streets you can see people throwing garbage on the ground.

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, others believe it is the duty of everyone to protect nature, improve the ecological and sanitary-epidemiological

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, prevent environmental damage and increase the ecological culture of the humanity and I agree.

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, creating some special classes about human damage on

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environment

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the environment

or sticking posters about

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the nature

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preserve on

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the walls

of public areas. Another reason for

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opinion is

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the condition

of the earth is directly related to the life of man and other living organisms.To be more precise,

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group of people

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considers

that humans should preserve the

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nature, not

for only themselves,

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animals. In conclusion

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while some people have some reasons to believe stopping harmful actions of human is impossible.I tend to think that people can change

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condition together.(287 words)