Human activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans cannot stop damaging the planet where as other believe that we can alter our behaviour and future damage.

Nowadays major
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Nowadays, major
human actions are affecting badly to the
environment
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From the perspective of some people, the damage done by humanity is endless.Others,
however
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think that if people control harmful actions
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they can tackle issues and prevent them.Personally, I find the latter more convincing. Those who support the idea of irreversible damaging have their own justifications.
First
of all, the harmful changes that are taking place are not always related to human
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
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they might be natural.
In other words
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it is their opinion that the natural disasters
such
as floods,
eartquakes
shaking and vibration at the surface of the earth resulting from underground movement along a fault plane or from volcanic activity
earthquakes
earthquake
, tornadoes, eruptions may harm the condition of the planet more than us
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humans.
For instance
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those kind of terrible events
kill
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kills
on average 60 thousand people per year
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gloabally
throughout the world
globally
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Furthermore
, today more and more people are indifferent to the cleanliness of the
environment
, which means that their attention to cleanliness has declined.
For example
, in the streets you can see people throwing garbage on the ground.
On the other hand
, others believe it is the duty of everyone to protect nature, improve the ecological and sanitary-epidemiological
environment
, prevent environmental damage and increase the ecological culture of the humanity and I agree.
For instance
, creating some special classes about human damage on
environment
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the environment
or sticking posters about
nature
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the nature
a nature
preserve on
walls
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the walls
of public areas. Another reason for
this
opinion is
condition
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the condition
of the earth is directly related to the life of man and other living organisms.To be more precise,
this
group of people
consider
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considers
that humans should preserve the
nature not
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nature, not
for only themselves,
also
animals. In conclusion
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while some people have some reasons to believe stopping harmful actions of human is impossible.I tend to think that people can change
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