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The below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below?

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Introduction
The chart gives information about
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 consumer product in four
european
of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe
European
 countries. There are six goods on the chart
Body · 1
According to chart
Use synonyms
britian
Suggestion
Britian
 spend Money on all
product
Suggestion
products
.
Accept space
.
Use synonyms
Britian
a monarchy in northwestern Europe occupying most of the British Isles; divided into England and Scotland and Wales and Northern Ireland; 'Great Britain' is often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom
Britain
 highest expending among other countries. But
,
Accept space
,
 lowest Personal stares
.
Accept space
.
 France and Italy lower than all
european
of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe
European
 countries.
Body · 2
Germany
expending
Suggestion
is expending
expends
 nearly 150
pound
Suggestion
pounds
 on
persolan
concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
streos
a message that tells the particulars of an act or occurrence or course of events; presented in writing or drama or cinema or as a radio or television program
stories
. France is almost to
germany
a republic in central Europe; split into East Germany and West Germany after World War II and reunited in 1990
Germany
Linking Words
Moreover Germany
Accept comma addition
Moreover, Germany
 highest
spendint
the act of spending or disbursing money
spending
 on tennis
racquats
a sports implement (usually consisting of a handle and an oval frame with a tightly interlaced network of strings) used to strike a ball (or shuttlecock) in various games
racquets
rackets
Body · 3
Italy most spending Money on toys
.
Accept space
.
 Italy is lowest in tennis
racquats
a sports implement (usually consisting of a handle and an oval frame with a tightly interlaced network of strings) used to strike a ball (or shuttlecock) in various games
racquets
. Italy
expending
Suggestion
is expending
expends
 between 140
pound
Suggestion
pounds
 to 160 pounds that limit
fort
Suggestion
for t
 he
italy
a republic in southern Europe on the Italian Peninsula; was the core of the Roman Republic and the Roman Empire between the 4th century BC and the 5th century AD
Italy
Body · 4
İn
france
a republic in western Europe; the largest country wholly in Europe
France
 approximately 155 pounds
on
Suggestion
of
 CDs
.
Accept space
.
Also
Linking Words
 that
equil
having the same quantity, value, or measure as another
equal
equals
 to Toys
speding
changing location rapidly
speeding
spending
. France
spend
Suggestion
spends
 Money on tennis
racquats
a sports implement (usually consisting of a handle and an oval frame with a tightly interlaced network of strings) used to strike a ball (or shuttlecock) in various games
racquets
rackets
.
Body · 5
Use synonyms
Britian
a monarchy in northwestern Europe occupying most of the British Isles; divided into England and Scotland and Wales and Northern Ireland; 'Great Britain' is often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom
Britain
 highest spending 170
pound
Suggestion
pounds
 on
photografic
relating to photography or obtained by using photography
photographic
 Film. Thereby
Britian
Use synonyms
 is richer than other countries.
Conclusion
Consequently
Linking Words
Britian
Use synonyms
 goods higher than all countries and France lower than all countries.

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