The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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know internet
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know, the internet
know the internet
has become a daily
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the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
in our life, it's
has changed
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changed
a lot in our
socialize
relating to human society and its members
socials
. There are been many positive and
negative which
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negative, which
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refers to the speaker or writer
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in a position lower than
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While
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of the relatively near future
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to internet which as been in human life since
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1900's, its
been
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in a very impressive manner
dramatically
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invented
which been used to send an Email which is
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the state or fact of existing
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used only for
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a
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a group of people who work together
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organization
organisations
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the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
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the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
for most of the people they use it to be in contact
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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