Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

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Acquesition

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Acquisition

of knowledge is something that each individual craves for.

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the mode one

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choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans

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does influence it.People often think that they can acquire and master anything without any guidance, In my

view

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view, this

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is a right decision to follow.

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when a person sets to acquire

anyknowledge

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any knowledge

or skill he/she is completely unaware of its fundamentals and independent venture into

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unknown horizon is not something that

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intelligent being would resort to. A teacher is well groomed and polish in the subject matter he/she purposes to teach,instructers are well aware of the hurdels and pitfalls someone might encounter while learning something,they are always ready with alternatives and extra support when needed they have knowledge of additional resources and techniques that maybe required to support and overcome the student's shortcomings. Let me highlight the example of Helen Keller

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Helen was born blind and her parents

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Were

tromatized

inflict a trauma upon

traumatized

traumatised

by her shortcomings they wanted to sculpt Helen into a confident and independent girl who was self

relient

relying on another for support

reliant

resilient

and strong despite her

handicape

the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness

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They relentlessly looked for a tutor who could help them out

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eventually they found a wonderful teacher who not only guided Helen Keller to become self reliant but

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a well known personality

who

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Who

serves as an inspiration to others

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Teacher

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The teacher

is just not a person

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he/she is a mentor a guide and a pathway to

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one's

success in life. I would recapitulate

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that learning

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procured under the guidance of

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a teacher

is far more superior to self gained independent learning.

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

248 words

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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.

Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In most countries, animal and plant species are declining rapidly. What are the causes of this? What measures could be done to prevent this decline?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?