Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

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Acquisition
of knowledge is something that each individual craves for.
However
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the mode one
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choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans
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does influence it.People often think that they can acquire and master anything without any guidance, In my
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is a right decision to follow.
Firstly
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when a person sets to acquire
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any knowledge
or skill he/she is completely unaware of its fundamentals and independent venture into
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an
unknown horizon is not something that
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an
intelligent being would resort to. A teacher is well groomed and polish in the subject matter he/she purposes to teach,instructers are well aware of the hurdels and pitfalls someone might encounter while learning something,they are always ready with alternatives and extra support when needed they have knowledge of additional resources and techniques that maybe required to support and overcome the student's shortcomings. Let me highlight the example of Helen Keller
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Helen was born blind and her parents
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Were
tromatized
inflict a trauma upon
traumatized
traumatised
by her shortcomings they wanted to sculpt Helen into a confident and independent girl who was self
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relying on another for support
reliant
resilient
and strong despite her
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the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness
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They relentlessly looked for a tutor who could help them out
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eventually they found a wonderful teacher who not only guided Helen Keller to become self reliant but
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Who
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The teacher
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that learning
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a teacher
is far more superior to self gained independent learning.
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