Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We live in a shadow of the life, plus we must learn, think, speak, read, write, etc. In specific laws because we are living in a dictatorship,
this
is a dramatic case and paradoxical situation. Most people live in
this
place and
this
process has been going on all through history, but the difference between experiences of society leads them to destroy it.
This
type of government always has common structures
such
as the huge aim of achieving, Integration many groups together to hide negative points, a holly book and horrible regime to performing justice and many other character traits of them. The articles and research that publish about
this
subject show that: "the main topic and keyword on
this
kind of organization is controlling." But why they do
this
works? The recent studies about Nazism clear
this
subject, they believe germanium society learns and wants to live in a dictatorship because the germanium educational procedure taught students to live in under control.
This
society didn't create in a special time, it has risen in a democratic process. It means that all social parameters were aware to accept
this
, even cultural revolution happens in
this
time. These similar laws aren't special for the political government in a special time in history because we can see the new model of dictatorship in the modern world. After the world war and the industrial revolution, many new pieces of equipment invented, at
first
, they were an instrument to fight but the politician innovative minds alter the use of those. They attempt to permeable to the new destination with those without any sands and blood. Populism, propaganda, attractive justice in law, and other things build devastating societies after decades. If we want to rebuild
this
population, we need many centuries because the
first
step to changeability is changing attitudes and accepting history, with
this
condition Do we like to make a mind revolution?
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