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Your English teacher has asked you to write a review of a restaurant in your area. You should talk about the kind of food it offers, the decor, the service and what your dining experience was like.

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The " King House" is a
restaurant
 situated in the heart of Xuan Hoa Ward. It is the favourite hangout
place
 for young people and families. As you enter the
place
 you are welcomed by a modern setting and colourful lights. The view in King House is extremely beautiful which make feel calm and peaceful.
Moreover
, the atmosphere inside is great. There are a great number of small tables and cushy chairs and sofa. It is really comfortable to sit on them with a small company of people.
Besides
, it is possible to come here with a big company and celebrate some special event, like birthday parties or engagement. The only minus in
this
place
 is the great number of people every day. It can be too hard to find a
place
 to sit when there are too many people, the
place
 is too loud for me. The menu offers a wide variety of mouth-watering starters. I had toast with tomatoes and jam while my friend tried egg rolls and orange juice. They were exquisite. The main course consisted in grilled salmon and a
cassolette
 of Coley with mussels, which really thrilled us. It all was followed by a delicious apple pie served with an ice cream for dessert. All the products were fresh and the dishes had the warmth of home-made food. The chefs take great care in selecting the best quality ingredients. The
restaurant
also
 caters for all tastes by providing a large selection of the best wines of the region, which are pricey but worth sampling.
In addition
, the atmosphere is not the only thing that I like in
this
restaurant
. I
also
 like the service. The waiters are very nice and do everything possible to satisfy their clients. In general, I'm so happy that there is
such
 a great
place
 where I can spend a wonderful time with my family and friends. I will carry on visiting
this
restaurant
 because I like the comfortable atmosphere, friendly waiters, affordable prices, and excellent dishes. For these reasons I highly recommend going to the King House
restaurant
.
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