The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-tim e work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the data about people who graduated from the United Kingdom's universities in 2008 and do not have full-time work;
students
are divided into two categories: graduated and Use synonyms
postgraduated
. Graduates \postgraduates
Looking from an Correct your spelling
postgraduate
post graduated
postgraduates
overall
perspective, the majority of Linking Words
students
decided to continue Use synonyms
studying
Correct article usage
the studying
proccess
, Correct your spelling
process
while
the least proportion of them have started Linking Words
volintary
work.
Turning to details, roughly 30 000 graduates of the United Kingdom Correct your spelling
voluntary
voluntarily
choosed
Correct your spelling
chose
further
study, which is the highest index among the other three categories. Linking Words
Students
who have got a part-time job or even unemployed compromised 17.735 and 16.235, respectively. The least number of Use synonyms
students
showed Use synonyms
the
(an) interest in voluntary work and presented 3.500 Correct article usage
apply
students
.
In comparison, about 2 725 postgraduate Use synonyms
student
(Change to a plural noun
students
students
) from the UK Use synonyms
cintinued
their Correct your spelling
continued
continue
study
. Fix the agreement mistake
studies
However
, it is Linking Words
also
the highest percentage of Linking Words
students
as in the case Use synonyms
with
graduates. The lowest one Change preposition
of
also
Linking Words
was
those who showed
The number of postgraduate Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct your spelling
students
sudents
was lower than graduate Correct your spelling
students
students
Use synonyms
for
about 10 timesChange preposition
by
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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