Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

AT PRESENT, THERE ARE ENORMOUS ENHANCEMENT IN THE TECHNOLOGY FIELD SINCE 200 CENTURY. OWNING TO
THIS
, THE NUMBER OF JOBLESS PEOPLE HAVE SOARED TOO AND
THIS
PROCESS CONSISTANTLY SURGING WITH THE TIME.
THIS
ESSAY WOULD PARTIALLY CONCUR WITH THE ABOVE THOUGHT DUE TO THE SEVEARAL DETRIMENTAL AND BENEFICIAL EFFECTS ON THE NATION'S DEVELOPMENT.
FIRSTLY
,
THIS
ESSAY WOULD DISCUSS THE MAJOR DEVASTATING DARWBACK OF
THIS
PROCESS AND
SECONDLY
, HOW
THIS
TREND CONTRIBUTS TO MAKE A CONTINENT'S
ECONOMY
STRONG AND STABLE THAN OTHER CONTINENTS.
ALTHOUGH
, I THINK, IT IS THE GREAT ACHIEVEMENT FOR THE TERRITORY TO HAVE
SUCH
A LATEST AND BENEFICIAL TECHNOLOGIES, NONETHLESS, GOVERNMENT SHOULD THINK OF ALL THE CONSEQUENCES BEFORE GRABING THE OPPORTUNITY. ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME DETRIMENTAL IMPACT OF AN ENHANCED TECHNOLOGY IS THAT IT IS CONTRUBUTING TO DECLINING FINANCIAL CONDITION OF THE WORKERS WHO ARE WELL-KNOWN FOR THEIR MANUAL WORKING SKILLS. WHEN A MACHINE TAKES A CHARGE OF DOING WORK
THEN
THE EMPLOYERS DO NOT REQUIRE TO KEEP THE STAFF AS BEFORE.
THEREFORE
, THE WORKERS USED TO GET THE LAYOFF.
THIS
MAKE THEM IN THE FINACIAL SHORTAGE THAT THEY ARE UNABLE TO FEED THEIR FAMILY.
FOR INSTANCE
, AS PER THE USA EMPLOYMENT SECTION SURVEY, 60% OF THE LABOURS ARE JOBLESS SINCE MANY YEARS DUE TO THE DIGITAL TECHNOLOGY.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, IT
ALSO
HAS A MAJOR ADVATGE THAT HELPS THE REGIME TO KEEP THE NATION'S
ECONOMY
STRONG AND SAFE. BECAUSE, THE USE OF A NEW TECHNOLOGY REQUIRES A HIGH SKILLED EMPLOYEES THAT CHARGES 6 DIGIT SALARY. AND,
THIS
HIGHER WAGES MAKE THEM TO PAY HUGE TAX TO THE AUTHORITY.
CONSEQUENTLY
, THE GOVERNMENT WOULD HAVE ENOUGH FINACIAL SUPPORT FROM THE REVENUE AGENCY THAT AUTOMATICALLY BOOM TO THE
ECONOMY
AT PEAK LEVEL IN COMAPARE TO PREVIOUS YEARS.
FOR EXAMPLE
, ACCORDING TO THE AUSTRALIAN FINANCE DEPARTMENT REPORT OF THE
LAST
2 YEARS, THE
ECONOMY
HAVE BEEN BOOSTING WITH THE YEARS DUE TO THE ACCEPTANCE OF THE NEWER TEECHNOLOGY. IN CONCLUSION, THE INCREASED ADVANCEMENT IN THE TECHNILOGY FIELD INDEED BE AN ASSET IN FORMING A NEW NATION
THAT IS
CAPABLE OF COMPETING WITH DEVELOPED TERRITORIES
SUCH
AS USA, UK. ALTHOGH, THE REGIME SHOULD
ALSO
THINK ABOUT THE CIVILIAN'S OPPORTUNITIES BEFORE SUPPORTING OF INTRODUCING THE NEW GADGETS TO THE PUBLIC.
THIS
IS THE WAY, THE AUTHORITY WOULD ACQUIRE A SUCCESS IN BALANCING BOTH ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THE LATEST TREND.
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