Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Weather plays a vital role in
everyone way
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a everyone way
of living and the people enjoy different entertaining hobby in each climate. A proportion of our community preferred the winter season, whereas there is a group of people who believed that
summer
season enjoyable. In my view point,
summer
period is more amusing rather than wintertime. To start with the summertime, there are innumerable pleasurable activities which
deligh
cause to be slowed down or delayed
delay
the individual heart mostly.
Firstly
, the activity of swimming which is not only
entertaining but
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entertaining, but
also
good for your physical health. It
is consider
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is considered
to be one of the best
exercise
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exercises
available for cardio.
Secondly
, the picnic at the beaches which can only be valuable in the hot weather. When the temperature crosses the thirty degree
celcius
Swedish astronomer who devised the centigrade thermometer (1701-1744)
Celsius
, the people will love to go to
sea side
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the seaside
seaside
.
Last
but not least, the collection of wear option available in the midsummer
have
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has
their own satisfaction.
For example
, there are several options available for
summer
clothing like
t-shirts
a garment worn on the upper half of the body
shirts
,
colorful
having striking color
colourful
shirts, jeans, shorts and many more.
Although
, these
option
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options
can
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can also opt
can also be opted
also
be opt in the fall time, the necessity of winter
wear
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wears
ruined your perfect fashion of your choice.
On the contrary
, wintertime
also provide
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also provides
the numerous valuable and entertaining activities which have their own fun. The top
in
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on
of
my list is the ice skating,
this
is the only activity which will only be enjoyed during the midwinter, when the snow has completely
cover
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covered
the tract. The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
one is to stay and delight in in the igloo houses, which one cannot get
feature
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featured
in the
summer
season.
Lastly
, barbeque, despite that it can enjoy in the
summer
as well, the real fun can be availed in the fall period only. To sum up, the both weather conditions have their own way of living, but
mostly
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most
people prefer
enjoy
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to enjoy
the hot weather as the essay has
highlted
move into the foreground to make more visible or prominent
highlighted
the extent way valuable activity which can only be enjoyed in the summertime only.
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