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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are the advantages more than disadvantages of such services

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In these days, people are installing
different kind
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different kinds
a different kind
 of software, which translate languages
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of
from
 the internet. I consider that
language
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 translation apps can bring many advantages
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to
 people's life more than disadvantages it may have. These programs include some drawbacks. In these programs, there is no way to use words
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 to each other, and in principle, there is no correct grammar and sentence so a person who has no knowledge of the new
language
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 cannot learn it only with these programs. In these
applications we cannot
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applications, we cannot
 see how to use idioms and expressions and not mean the correctly. A large part of the
languages
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language
 of the countries
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contains
 the same slang terms and dialects that these programs often do not cover them. Despite some drawbacks, may the benefits of these tools are greater. These programs reduce the need
of
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 people to spend a lot of money to learn a new
language
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,
although
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 these programs do not require a high fee to go to any country to learn and take a
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 class.
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, if someone wants to travel to
new country
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a new country
new countries
 for a few days as a leisure trip and he does not have the time and money to go to class, by installing one of these programs, he can travel without any problems in terms of communicating with the citizens of that country and can resolve his needs during that trip.
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, these programs are not specific to a particular time and place, and you can use these programs wherever and whenever you want.
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, it should be said that it is better to take full advantage of the advancement of technology in our daily affairs and not have an excuse for things
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 as learning and communicating through a new
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, even
,
Accept space
,
 we can help our progress in
this
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 field through related apps.
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