In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

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becomes

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a major problem

across the globe now. It is commonly seen that despite earning a bachelors or master’s degree from prominent university, still one remains unemployed. There are ample of reasons behind

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scenario, which I will discuss in

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upcoming essay with some solutions followed by my opinion.

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with, over population and tough competition among youth

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primary aspects

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unemployment

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, rising number of people in many

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countries, causing

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situation.

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, it can be believed that if there are more people, there will be less job opportunities in the market, because these two are interconnected with each other.

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, competition is another factor, which increasing the

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chart.

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most

people keen to pursue

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studies in Engineering

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sector, such

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as Computer Science or Medical field.

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, it

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can be predicted

that there would be more graduates than actual jobs available in the corporate world.

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, I think government and educational institutions can tackle

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issue.

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of all, government should enforce some scheme to control the population of the nation,

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as “a child for a family”.

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Chinese Government

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the Chinese Government

has announced two-child policy law in October 2015, which was resulted in

positive manner

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a positive manner

. Apart from that,

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the university

can take another step to provide “On-Campus” hiring for the

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year students;

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, they would have a job before they finish their studies. To conclude, there are many factors like

over population

too much population

overpopulation

and competition for

unemployment

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even for the highly qualified graduates. In my view, both the government and educational institutions should come together to address

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situation

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