In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Today
unemployment
becomes
major problem
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a major problem
across the globe now. It is commonly seen that despite earning a bachelors or master’s degree from prominent university, still one remains unemployed. There are ample of reasons behind
this
scenario, which I will discuss in
this
upcoming essay with some solutions followed by my opinion.
To begin
with, over population and tough competition among youth
are
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is
primary aspects
for
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of
unemployment
.
Firstly
, rising number of people in many
countries causing
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countries, causing
this
situation.
In other words
, it can be believed that if there are more people, there will be less job opportunities in the market, because these two are interconnected with each other.
Secondly
, competition is another factor, which increasing the
unemployment
chart.
This
is because
mostly
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most
people keen to pursue
further
studies in Engineering
sector
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sector, such
such
as Computer Science or Medical field.
Therefore
, it
can be predict
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can be predicted
that there would be more graduates than actual jobs available in the corporate world.
However
, I think government and educational institutions can tackle
this
issue.
First
of all, government should enforce some scheme to control the population of the nation,
such
as “a child for a family”.
For example
,
Chinese Government
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the Chinese Government
has announced two-child policy law in October 2015, which was resulted in
positive manner
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a positive manner
. Apart from that,
university
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the university
can take another step to provide “On-Campus” hiring for the
last
year students;
as a result
, they would have a job before they finish their studies. To conclude, there are many factors like
over population
too much population
overpopulation
and competition for
unemployment
even for the highly qualified graduates. In my view, both the government and educational institutions should come together to address
this
situation
Submitted by Parth Patel on

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