In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
Today
unemployment
becomes major problem
across the globe now. It is commonly seen that despite earning a bachelors or master’s degree from prominent university, still one remains unemployed. There are ample of reasons behind Suggestion
a major problem
this
scenario, which I will discuss in this
upcoming essay with some solutions followed by my opinion.
To begin
with, over population and tough competition among youth are
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is
for
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of
unemployment
. Firstly
, rising number of people in many countries causing
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countries, causing
this
situation. In other words
, it can be believed that if there are more people, there will be less job opportunities in the market, because these two are interconnected with each other. Secondly
, competition is another factor, which increasing the unemployment
chart. This
is because mostly
people keen to pursue Suggestion
most
further
studies in Engineering sector
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sector, such
such
as Computer Science or Medical field. Therefore
, it can be predict
that there would be more graduates than actual jobs available in the corporate world.
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can be predicted
However
, I think government and educational institutions can tackle this
issue. First
of all, government should enforce some scheme to control the population of the nation, such
as “a child for a family”. For example
, Chinese Government
has announced two-child policy law in October 2015, which was resulted in Suggestion
the Chinese Government
positive manner
. Apart from that, Suggestion
a positive manner
university
can take another step to provide “On-Campus” hiring for the Suggestion
the university
last
year students; as a result
, they would have a job before they finish their studies.
To conclude, there are many factors like over population
and competition for too much population
overpopulation
unemployment
even for the highly qualified graduates. In my view, both the government and educational institutions should come together to address this
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