Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing useful for zoo. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Nowadays, there are many zoos have been placed in my country.

However

, some people think that a

zoo

has no useful purposes.

On the other hand

, disagree with those people because it can educate young children, it provides a habitat for animals, and it makes people feel relaxed. For many reasons, which will be mentioned below the essay.

Firstly

, zoos can make children study better about the animals. Children can learn about

animals not

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animals, not

only from books and TV

programs but

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programs, but

from actually watching them alive and observing them. They can see animals, touch them and even feed them. It is an amazing experience for a child. He gains more knowledge and experience from

this

“communication” with an animal.

Therefore

, they may learn more effectively by the active way.

Secondly

, zoos may be a good habitat for many species, it is

also

a

safe guard

make safe

safeguard

for animals from natural disaster.

Nowadays due

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Nowadays, due

to

global warming huge amount

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the global warming huge amount

of forest and animals are destroyed.

For instance

, the number of polar

beer

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beers

is reduced from the past decade. There is

large amount

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a large amount

of polar bears are

died

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dying

for each year. There are more and more people want to catch or kill

animal

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an animal

the animal

animals

illegally.

This

leads to total destruction of whole species.

Thus

, if people keep the animals in the

zoo

, there may be better for the animals. At some

zoo

, they may have a great environment.

Finally

, people can relax when they come to the

zoo

. After a week, people may get

stress

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stressed

from their work or study. There is very good entertainment for

whole family

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the whole family

. Children are eager to see the animals and they can learn the

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

of numerous animals. The

zoo

can be the best way

to

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for

them to reduce their stress.

As a result

, at there, it is really beautiful, they not only can meet many great landscapes but

also

feed and touch many animals. In conclusion, I hope that people will build more and more large zoos that have the best environment for many animals to stay and they will let their children go to the

zoo

in order to make they learn better and reduce their stress.