Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few people argue that best
job
could be availed by getting through University education only, as it offers enough opportunity to get exposed with
variety
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a variety
of practical experiments
where
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were
ones could discover his choice of capacity.
however
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However
, others believe that getting into direct at
work
and have their experience, by adopting
this
option might save them from wasting their
time
and money, I believe that every individual should be given opportunity to develop himself and identify his area of
strength
and weakness till he reaches to
certain age
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a certain age
where they can
work
independently.
On the other hand
, academic studies
helps
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help
people to discover
thier
of them or themselves
their
area of
strength
and interest, as they go through years of studies
,
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,
people are exposed to different kind of works.
Also
during these periods
one
is able to decide, in which field he could perform better and develop fully. Because everyone is gifted with
one
or the other qualities,
hence
people should be encouraged to find those.
For example
, children studying at
University
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the University
are able to choose
thier
of them or themselves
their
interesting field and go specific training like- engineering, masters, philosophy, doctor and nurses etc. I believe that
every
all people
everyone
one
must give
thier
of them or themselves
their
valuable
time according
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time, according
to his financial access and get educated before they go for any
job
, in order to make their career brighter.
On the other hand
, people who consider that it's a waste of
time
and money, could do better if they give little way to
thier
of them or themselves
their
thinking, because by doing
work
straight away may put them
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
life long trouble and might bring them to disappointment and disaster in life. As they are not aware of
thier
of them or themselves
their
hidden
strength
people might get
missguided
poorly conceived or thought out
misguided
and always
work
as a subordinate.
For example
, many uneducated people in our country
have not fix
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have not fixed
job
, as a consequence they can be removed from their
work
at any
time
, with less
surerity
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sorority
of getting
job
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a job
again. I believe that
this
mistake leads many people with unemployment and starvation, leading to depression and anxiety in life. To sum up,
although
getting
University degree
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a University degree
take
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takes
time
and
money it's
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money, it's
worth spending rather than staying ignorant of
one
's interest and
strength
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • higher education
  • specialized fields
  • job prospects
  • earning potential
  • formal education
  • networking opportunities
  • career advancement
  • practical skills
  • work environment
  • financial independence
  • high costs
  • skills and experience
  • formal education
  • prioritize
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