Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few people argue that best

job

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could be availed by getting through University education only, as it offers enough opportunity to get exposed with

variety

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a variety

of practical experiments

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

ones could discover his choice of capacity.

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however

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However

, others believe that getting into direct at

work

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and have their experience, by adopting

this

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option might save them from wasting their

time

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and money, I believe that every individual should be given opportunity to develop himself and identify his area of

strength

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and weakness till he reaches to

certain age

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a certain age

where they can

work

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independently.

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, academic studies

helps

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help

people to discover

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thier

of them or themselves

their

area of

strength

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and interest, as they go through years of studies

,

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,

people are exposed to different kind of works.

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during these periods

one

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is able to decide, in which field he could perform better and develop fully. Because everyone is gifted with

one

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or the other qualities,

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people should be encouraged to find those.

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, children studying at

University

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the University

are able to choose

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thier

of them or themselves

their

interesting field and go specific training like- engineering, masters, philosophy, doctor and nurses etc. I believe that

every

all people

everyone

one

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must give

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thier

of them or themselves

their

valuable

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time according

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time, according

to his financial access and get educated before they go for any

job

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, in order to make their career brighter.

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, people who consider that it's a waste of

time

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and money, could do better if they give little way to

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thier

of them or themselves

their

thinking, because by doing

work

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straight away may put them

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

life long trouble and might bring them to disappointment and disaster in life. As they are not aware of

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thier

of them or themselves

their

hidden

strength

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people might get

missguided

poorly conceived or thought out

misguided

and always

work

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as a subordinate.

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, many uneducated people in our country

have not fix

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have not fixed

job

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, as a consequence they can be removed from their

work

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at any

time

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, with less

surerity

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sorority

of getting

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job

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a job

again. I believe that

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mistake leads many people with unemployment and starvation, leading to depression and anxiety in life. To sum up,

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getting

University degree

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a University degree

take

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takes

time

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and

money it's

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money, it's

worth spending rather than staying ignorant of

one

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's interest and

strength

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.