In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

More and more people are graduating every year, but some are left jobless. There could be a lot of factors that lead to
this
grim scenario. In
this
essay
further
, the possible reasons for
such
situation to occur will be discussed, and later a viable solution will be provided. The main contributor for some people to remain unemployed is excess competition, meaning that, with an increase in the literacy rate, it is becoming challenging to avail jobs with each passing day.
Therefore
, in
such
tough market, only the best candidates are offered jobs.
Additionally
, when compared to the past, women are
also
striving to become bread earners, due to
this
, there is a huge shortage in the number of jobs available. A study conducted by Standford University,
for example
, claims that for each job there are at least 5 applicants. The most
practicle
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
solution to
this
problem is generating employment by starting new projects across nations. There are
lot
Suggestion
lots
a lot
of potential services and products that may be required in the world. The government should start new projects, and
also
support private organizations to take up new initiatives that may create opportunities for providing work to the huge masses.
For instance
, in
China 80
Accept comma addition
China, 80
% of the world products are manufactured,
therefore
, each individual is engaged in any of the production
unit
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units
because there is
abundance
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an abundance
of job opportunities. To conclude,
although
everyone is qualified and capable of earning nowadays, a few are left to face
disappoitment
a feeling of dissatisfaction that results when your expectations are not realized
disappointment
in terms of work.
This
crisis is a result of increased competition due to raise in
number
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the number
of qualified
personnels
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personnel
, and
also
in particular
increase in
number
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the number
of female competitors. Though
their
in or at that place
there
is a
short fall
the property of being an amount by which something is less than expected or required
shortfall
of vacancies, with government initiatives, employment can be generated and provided to the rightly deserved ones.
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