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economical
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thus
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in
business
, too, with its advancement. The business
tycoons and business
corporations dominate in each domain. It is emphasized as demand of modern world
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are governed
business
agents, range from
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of
product
to geological resources. Thus
, this
system
relate
to marketing which tempts more consumers, cooperating with mass media. It influences Suggestion
relates
customers’ view
that it may stimulate to buy their products. The reason why is that huge Suggestion
the customers’ view
business
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budget, which
product
widely. As well as, they contrive the high qualified condition which people can purchase their product
without difficulties. Frequently, they make performance
for glorifying their company’s Suggestion
a performance
system
and positive aspects. As far as I am concerned, all customers have an inclination to purchase both a good quality and low priced products. For instance
, one brand can be example
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an example
examples
this
argument. Coca-Cola is the largest food industry whose product
clientele around the world because it was established true controlling system
such
as advertising, tasting
, designing, pricing. Even it is based on red the act of subjecting to experimental test in order to determine how well something works
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color
which contrive the feeling of a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
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perilous side
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influence local small business
agency which insist of
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on
economy
of the country. These kind of Suggestion
the economy
business
are effected
by Suggestion
is affected
are affected
worldwide
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the worldwide business agency
business
agency which widespreading
their products constantly. The first
cause of it is that there is no funding system
or relieve tax payments by government which
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government, which
business
system
. Government should be shoulder onerous financial burden
for the local companies as it Suggestion
a shoulder onerous financial burden
gain
appropriate balance. Suggestion
gains
Besides
, local businessmen never take the responsibility of the customers’ safety. This
is the reason why consumers to opt
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business
’s products
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products, although
although
it is expensive than locally, if people who possess healthy life style.
To conclude, the main rule of business
is recruiting people with its quality, appearance and price by
advertising of mass media. Large Suggestion
of
business
has a tendency to attract people by giving guaranty
for their products and chosen true way of marketing a written assurance that some product or service will be provided or will meet certain specifications
guarantee
system
. For local business
should be supplement
by some Suggestion
supplemented
way
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way, such
such
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