There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Manager, My name is Marco Milani and I am writing

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epistle to grab your attention about the problems I have been facing

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last

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two weeks with your

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service. I live at Airport Road and usually takes 30 number

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, which

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go to Bramalae

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terminal. I have been using your

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service for

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5 years, but it is very unfortunate to say that your

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service is no more accurate.

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of all, I want to let you know that some of the

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drivers are not punctual of time and most of the time, they skip my area route. My office time is 9 AM and it takes me 20 minutes to reach there, but whenever the

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is late or skip my area route, I get late to the work and

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lead

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bad impact on my employee report. Another issue is with the

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ticket charges. The regular ticket charges are $5 but sometimes the driver charges $2 extra without any justification. Not even me, most the passengers are affected due to these problems. By going late at work is affecting my profile and paying extra on regular ticket

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is not worth for all. These problems are creating daily basis issues and losing your customers who connect with your company for many years. I would like to suggest you that Kindly look into

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matter and keep an eye on your daily drivers report so that your

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well reputed

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company may not bother the passengers.

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Sincerely, Marco Milani