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Some people think that completing a university education is the best way to get a good job. Others, however, think experience and soft skills are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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First
 and foremost, as everyone knows,
education
 is a substantial thing in our world for being successful in
this
 life. For that reason, parents always try to find a solution for sending their children to school in order to give them a rosy future. Some parents who live in the village,
although
, do not think like that, especially if these children are girls,
education
 is an inaccessible thing for them.
This
 is because these kinds of people are close-minded and their turn of mind is not the same as other people who are educated.
Besides
this
, there are some families who try to send their children to school and they desire that their children should graduate from the university. On the one hand, to be an educated person is not always an advantage in order to go about starting up.
Also
, it depends on your country and its demands.
This
 is
because perhaps
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because, perhaps
, your country which prefers to give higher
education
 (tertiary
education
) to students is able to hire and in
this
 way, they will be the kind of undergraduate who knows everything about its profession.
On the other hand
, there are some countries which prefer an experienced degree and to be educated is not the most important aspect
for
Suggestion
of
 them. According to them, if
this
 person has soft skills and
experience
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experience, then
then
 it is enough for employing him or her. Based on my observations, especially in my country, completing university is not a more and more essential thing
for
Suggestion
about
 finding a job than having experience and soft skills. It seems obvious that if we want to find a job or go about starting up, we should have an experience with our qualifications and it is really a tough situation for undergraduates.
As a result
, it depends on people and their abilities because there are some people who do not graduate from the university, but their knowledge is really
better
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good
 at
this
specialty
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Specialty
 than other people who are educated about it.
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