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This

chart

demonstrate

Suggestion

demonstrates

the use of various transportation means by kids in 1990 and 2010. By paying close attention to the

chart we

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chart, we

can see a

dramastic

suitable to or characteristic of drama

dramatic

reduction of using

publuc

not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole

public

transportation, using bikes and walking in the new generation. The most reductions are for walking and cycling, as we can see a reduction of about 6 millions and 4 millions trips per year can be understood from the chart. And the only increase is for the car passenger with more than 6

millions

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million

trips per year. And we

also

see a reduce in popularity of buses among the

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

for about 3

millions

Suggestion

million

trips per year. There are many reasons that can be considered for the

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

change among

children but

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children, but

I believe

this

can be due to the urbanization and mass production of cars. I think

this

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

change can have

major effect

Suggestion

a major effect

on the

childrens

Suggestion

children's

children

health and even their social skills as they

can not

cannot

make friends on their way to home or school in the near future.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

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171 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sport facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Being a celebrity - such as a famous film or sport personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems

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