Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This
chart
demonstrate
Suggestion
demonstrates
the use of various transportation means by kids in 1990 and 2010. By paying close attention to the
chart we
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chart, we
can see a
dramastic
suitable to or characteristic of drama
dramatic
reduction of using
publuc
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
transportation, using bikes and walking in the new generation. The most reductions are for walking and cycling, as we can see a reduction of about 6 millions and 4 millions trips per year can be understood from the chart. And the only increase is for the car passenger with more than 6
millions
Suggestion
million
trips per year. And we
also
see a reduce in popularity of buses among the
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
for about 3
millions
Suggestion
million
trips per year. There are many reasons that can be considered for the
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
change among
children but
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children, but
I believe
this
can be due to the urbanization and mass production of cars. I think
this
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
change can have
major effect
Suggestion
a major effect
on the
childrens
Suggestion
children's
children
health and even their social skills as they
can not
can not
cannot
make friends on their way to home or school in the near future.
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