Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

Now-a-days more and more cities
are being settle
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are settling
are settled
have settled
down. Cities are famous for their
infra structures
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructures
and the better opportunities of living a graceful
life it
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life, it
provides lots and lots of rural areas people either moving to cities or their areas are converting into cities. There are two types of housing
area
criteria that's been followed.
some
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Some
cities create housing areas by providing taller bindings while other
cities
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city
city's
housing by building
house
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houses
on
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with
a wider
area
of
land
. Both solutions are equally play important role city
infra structure
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
,
for
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in
very confined
space
where latitudinal
space
is limited the preferable
solution
is to make taller buildings where
their
in or at that place
there
is no confined
space
issue building houses on a wider
area
of
land
could be a feasible option. Most of the highly
population
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populated
cities
works
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work
on both hose building criteria, for those places which are commercial, the taller building
solution
is followed in order to accommodate more longitudinal
space
as
compare
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compared
to latitudinal. For better locality it is better to use
wider
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a wider area
area
of
land
for house construction and
such
type of construction the appearance of
area
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the area
an area
become more elegant. Both solutions have their own advantages, like to better utilization of
space
if its available building houses
on
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in
wider
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the wider area
area
of
land
would be more
preferable but
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preferable, but
if
its
it is
it's
about building
such
a building that have
space restriction
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space restrictions
a space restriction
than switching to
taller building
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the taller building solution
solution
would be
more better
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better
.
conclusively
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Conclusively
, both the
solution
can be used to utilize
space
in better approach, keeping
this
in view a lot of cities now are working on both types of approach like for some of their
area
construction they prefer taller buildings and for some areas mostly residential areas wide
area
housing policy is being followed.
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  • urban density
  • sustainability
  • public transportation
  • green spaces
  • community connections
  • overcrowding
  • economic implications
  • infrastructure impact
  • maintenance costs
  • carbon footprint
  • compact city
  • habitat destruction
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