Some people working six months of annually and rest of time they do what ever they like. Do you think its advantages overweight disadvantages

Private sector are becoming play a major role to provide employment, even employers can join
unregular schedule
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the irregular schedule
irregular schedule
of working
such
as half of the year
.
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While these kinds of jobs having less burden to employees yet, I will explain why
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
feel it is ultimately not for the best Inspite,
idea
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the idea
seems to be modern as
a
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an
unregulated employment opportunity can offer a number of advantages to employees The main one is in terms of
stressfree
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stress free
life
. These
services
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service
employees can enjoy social
life
with his family and children which will lead to improve
mental health
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the mental health
of a person
For instance
,
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,
Navy service allows
to
being one more than one
two
workers six month work and rest of 6 months
,
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,
individual
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individuals
an individual
can enjoy whatever he likes to do.
However these
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However, these
kinds of jobs are less as compared to regular jobs Despite these positive effects, In my views
,
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,
the downside of
this
liberal pattern of job outweighs. While the situation may be mentally beneficial for the employees, it can have
opposite impact
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the opposite impact
opposite impacts
on workers, particularly those who have
large family
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a large family
large families
or only one person as a source of income. Rising prices or inflation in
consumer sector
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the consumer sector
demands strong financial conditions, which can be only possible to involve in regular employment suchlike Banking
,
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,
Doctors and etc.In one survey from London university data showed 80% of people preferred regular jobs to raising their standard of living and only 20% remained
work
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working
in
unregular
contrary to rule or accepted order or general practice
irregular
jobs sector.
In other words
,
although
working six months in a year
maybe
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may be
convenient for the individual, it
maybe
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may be
burdensome for employees during bad financial
conditions even
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conditions, even
psychological In conclusion
,
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,
as
liberal pattern
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a liberal pattern
of job help in order to balance social
life
or personal
life
of emo. Even though
this
may enable to employees
stressfree
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stress free
life
, the situation tends to have more complicated than benefits especially for single income holders in a family.
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