Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve this resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

The diagram illustrates the process of
factory
-made
fish
pie and the various steps in its production. Overall, the process consists of three main stages, beginning with the delivery of the raw ingredients
such
as potatoes and salmon end ending with the storing of frozen
fish
pies.
First
of all, the potatoes are delivered to the
factory
via a delivery truck. After that, they are automatically cleaned, peeled and sliced, before being boiled.
Subsequently
boiled potatoes are left to chill and
then
they are stored. In the
next
stage, fresh salmon is being delivered to the
factory
, where it follows several steps before being used in the
fish
pie.
Firstly
, lemon juice and salt are added and
then
the salmon goes into a steam oven within 12 hours or less from its delivery. Following
this
,
factory
workers manually remove
skins
Suggestion
skin
and bones, after which they visually inspect the
fish
.
Next
, prepared peas, sauce and the boiled potatoes that were previously stored, are added to the final composition.
Finally
, the final products are wrapped by the
factory
workers and placed into a freezer. Following
this
, the frozen
fish
pies are dispatched to the store.
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