Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Explain the problem • Suggest a solution • Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Chase, I am one of the employees of Universal customer services, which is a tenant from BTC Tower. On behalf of my office mates, I am writing

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letter to complain about our concerns regarding the lack of parking spaces. I had been with my company for 3 years now and

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area has not been a problem since we usually park at the nearby vacant lot.

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, for the past few days, the government sequestered that parcel of land which made it difficult for us to park our cars. To make matters worse, many of them were victims of theft, tardiness during rush hours because they need to park

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almost a kilometre away and

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lack of safety and security for ladies who

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to work in graveyard shifts. In connection with

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and my colleagues would be grateful if you could tackle

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concern during your upcoming meeting tomorrow with your CEO and board of directors. Please mention to them that we urgently need you to provide us, your clients the free parking space we agreed upon during the renewal of our lease contract. I was aware of

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situation because I was the proxy of my boss at that time when my company extended the lease of a unit from your building. The parking lot is vital for all of us Business processing outsourcing employees. The reason for

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is to solve the

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problems. For

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queries and clarifications, you can reach me on my mobile number +63950**** or at my email address [email protected]. I am looking forward

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your prompt response. Thank you. Yours faithfully, (signed) Rachelle B*** Lessee