It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.

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The current phase of civilization and cultural change affects people in many ways. In some developing countries people are more towards Westernisation culture. In order to get better growth, people nowadays move towards the cities and for that they need to leave their family in village or town. There might be several reasons. To start with, In the past times, people used to live with their family, but the concept has dramatically changed now due to civilisation. There are vivid reasons that people need to leave their family.
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, if a person from the village has got a better job with higher pay scales in the city, he or she needs to leave the town for better future expansion.
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to that, people are leaving their home town to enjoy the high-quality lifestyle in the metro cities.
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, sometimes they separated from their parents. A student wants to get higher education in a foreign country is another example. For that, a student needs to go by himself. He or she cannot take their family members with them.
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, there are many possible ways that people can stay with their family.
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of all, Government should not only establish
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, local government should provide high quality of education for the children so that they do not need to go study abroad. To add that, people who live alone in a metro city, can force their family members to come and live with them. In that way they can be reunited together.
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, I came to Canada in 2017 for study purpose and my parents were in India. After I got settled in Canada, I forced them to come to Canada to live with me. They are here in Canada right now. In conclusion, growing future opportunities led people to move to other cities or foreign countries, yet there are several ways that they cannot be separated from their families. Government needs to play a vital role to create various opportunities and facilities in a village environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • family interactions
  • technological advancements
  • virtual interactions
  • dual-income households
  • urbanization
  • migration
  • social structures
  • individualism
  • family cohesiveness
  • belonging
  • open communication
  • emotional support
  • shared activities
  • family dynamics
  • work-life balance
  • family traditions
  • regular gatherings
  • counseling
  • family therapy
  • prioritizing family time
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