International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Do the problems of international travel outweigh its advantages?

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With the advancement of technology,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
between different countries become easier. Nowadays, it has become the backbone of many
economiees
the system of production and distribution and consumption
economies
of the world.
This
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situation has both pros and cons. By my humble opinion, advantages and disadvantages.
Undoubtadly
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Undoubtedly
, tourism
give
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gives
lots of benefits for
economy
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the economy
, as it can give more opportunities to individuals.
Firstly
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, it provides regular employment for many local people. Along with
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
, developed
anotrher
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
another
industries
such
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as hospitality
industry
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,
transport
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transport, industry
industry
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, education,
entertaiment
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
and food
industry
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. As an
eexample we
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example, we
example we
can take the
perioud
an amount of time
period
periods
parade
during the
coronavirus
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when everything was
clouse
move so that an opening or passage is obstructed; make shut
close
closed
and
as a
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result many
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result, many
countrieas
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
get
significsant
important in effect or meaning
significant
damage for economy and suffered because of
this
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. On the other side
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
has a
bed
that which is below standard or expectations as of ethics or decency
bad
effect on our natural environment, which can be seriously threatened by too many visitors. People usually do not pay
atention
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attention
on
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to
our nature and almost never care of it. We can see pollution in
differewnt
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
part of nature
such
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as air, water, land pollution and so.
on
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On
duye
time for Earth to make a complete rotation on its axis
day
due
to
indeviduals
a human being
individuals
used
to
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for
in
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the row
the garbage and do not
punished
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punish
for that. For
instace
an occurrence of something
instance
, we can take the same situation connected with the
quorontine
the ceremony of installing a new monarch
coronation
, when all people were sitting at home, and
as a result
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was
purification
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pure
purged
purified
of reservoirs and surrounding nature in general. In conclusion, the massive international tourism
industry
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and ever-increasing international travels have some environmental and cultural issues.
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, the opportunity and potentiality it has already created far outweigh the disadvantages of it.
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