Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most people believe that women ought to have more choices

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for

their positions

such

as being a solider. I somewhat disagree with

this

opinion, and I will explain why.

First

of all, people probably feel that the physical and psychological well-being of women

do not qualify

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does not qualify

to adapt the military.

For example

, the strong and high- stress body exercises

everyday

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every day

will be huge challenges for women during the training period and they might spend a hard time.

In addition

, women are easier to get pained, and they could not bear

some

one or some or every or all without specification

any

kind of

painful

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pain

, which will cause the whole military have to pay more attention

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to

them

instead

of focusing on training.

Finally

, we have to consider if women really suitable for military compare with other certain jobs

such

as teachers or doctors in society.

Therefore

, Most people better do the activities that best suit their skills or strengths and I think only few families would like to send their

daughter

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daughters

or wives to join the military.

On the contrary

, people believe that women in the military can be a support staff,

such

as medics or be assigned a non-combatant position. I do understand

this

opposing view, which is

provide

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providing

the carefulness and invaluable skills.

However

,

those

plural of "this"

these

positions have less help for the military during the peace time. In conclusion, personally, I think women should have the same right as men to choose their positions. Above all, though

,

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,

I believe that women are better not to join the military because the disadvantages are outweigh the benefits. Women are really

demanded

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demanding

by family

members particularly

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members, particularly

for parents and children.