It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent to do agree or disagree ?

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Some people argue that providing tertiary

education

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for a high percentage of teenagers is impossible and useless. From my perspective, I partly

argee

be in accord; be in agreement

agree

with these ideas will outline some reasons in

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essay.

Firstly

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, having a bachelor degree no longer play an

interal

existing as an essential constituent or characteristic

integral

part

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the future career of young people, even in

this

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modern and

knowledge-base

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knowledge-based

society. In many countries, vocational

school

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has become a better choice for teenagers who have graduated college, which offer cheaper

school

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fees as well as job security when they complete the courses. It’s time-saving for young people to finish their study stage and start to earn money in order to support

family

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the family

a family

instead

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of spending at least 3 or 4 years in order to pursue a

university

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degree.

Moreover

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, if everyone could

enroll

enrol

the

university

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, it would create pressure on government funds for

education

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and workforce like professors, tutors,… which is harmful to the national economy.

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is because

university

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graduates are not willing to apply the job and receive

salary

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a salary

which is not commensurate with their quality.

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, I think it’s possible to open the opportunity for a high percentage of young people to access tertiary

education

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, which mean that more and more private and public universities have to be opened. In Vietnam, the number of fresh-graduate teachers and professors who cannot find the job due to the lack of

school

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and

university

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is beyond the alert level, especially after the COVID – 19 pandemic. By

organzing

create (as an entity)

organizing

organising

new universities, jobless rate as well as

demanding

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demands

for entering

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university

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the university

of young people will be

solved

rescued; especially from the power and consequences of sin

saved

and tertiary

education

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in that country will be improved, which attracts more foreign students.

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, parents who have

desire

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a desire

for their children to apply private

university

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are commonly rich and willing to afford

school

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fees which cost an arm and a leg. In conclusion, I believe that it’s unnecessary to provide the high proportion of young people with tertiary

education

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, but in fact, most of the government in the world can open up the change for all young people to access

high

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higher

education

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Kha Nguyễn TrungTue Jul 28 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

limited resources
quality of education
strained resources
job market
underemployment
competition for skilled jobs
vocational training
apprenticeships
economic constraints
public budgets
inefficiencies
devalue
significance
perceived quality
universal access
diversity in skills
balanced society

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It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent to do agree or disagree ?

Your opinion

some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

Traditional schooling is out of date, boring and stifles a child’s natural talents, various professionals have pushed for an education revolution. Are there alternatives in the education system? Is traditional education doing more harm than good?

It is impossible to help all the people in the world who are in need, so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people think cheaper air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expansive in order to discourage people to have it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.