It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent to do agree or disagree ?
Some people argue that providing tertiary
education
for a high percentage of teenagers is impossible and useless. From my perspective, I partly argee
with these ideas will outline some reasons in be in accord; be in agreement
agree
this
essay.
Firstly
, having a bachelor degree no longer play an interal
part existing as an essential constituent or characteristic
integral
to
the future career of young people, even in Suggestion
in
this
modern and knowledge-base
society. In many countries, vocational Suggestion
knowledge-based
school
has become a better choice for teenagers who have graduated college, which offer cheaper school
fees as well as job security when they complete the courses. It’s time-saving for young people to finish their study stage and start to earn money in order to support family
, Suggestion
the family
a family
instead
of spending at least 3 or 4 years in order to pursue a university
degree. Moreover
, if everyone could enroll
the register formally as a participant or member
enrol
university
, it would create pressure on government funds for education
and workforce like professors, tutors,… which is harmful to the national economy. This
is because university
graduates are not willing to apply the job and receive salary
which is not commensurate with their quality.
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a salary
Secondly
, I think it’s possible to open the opportunity for a high percentage of young people to access tertiary education
, which mean that more and more private and public universities have to be opened. In Vietnam, the number of fresh-graduate teachers and professors who cannot find the job due to the lack of school
and university
is beyond the alert level, especially after the COVID – 19 pandemic. By organzing
new universities, jobless rate as well as create (as an entity)
organizing
organising
demanding
for entering Suggestion
demands
university
of young people will be Suggestion
the university
solved
and tertiary rescued; especially from the power and consequences of sin
saved
education
in that country will be improved, which attracts more foreign students. Furthermore
, parents who have desire
for their children to apply private Suggestion
a desire
university
are commonly rich and willing to afford school
fees which cost an arm and a leg.
In conclusion, I believe that it’s unnecessary to provide the high proportion of young people with tertiary education
, but in fact, most of the government in the world can open up the change for all young people to access high
Suggestion
higher
education
.Submitted by Kha Nguyễn Trung on
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