If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to drastically change our way of life. What is your opinion?

All across the world, people are facing a wealth of new and challenging environmental problems every day. The planet is poised at the brink of a severe environmental crisis. It’s time for people to alter their way of living for the better. As a human being, I would examine the roots of the matter and offer some statements of mine.

To begin

with the state of

this

problem. Global warming has become an undisputed fact about our current livelihoods. It is the result of human practices like emission of Greenhouse gases. The rising temperatures of the oceans and the Earth’s

surface causing

Accept comma addition

surface, causing

melting of polar ice caps,

rise

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a rise

in sea levels and

also

unnatural patterns of precipitation

such

as flash floods, excessive snow or

desertification

. Another problem is that human is

overcutting

show an exaggerated response to something

overreacting

overcoming

overacting

the trees in the forest for individual purposes.

For instance

, Vietnam used to be a place of “silver sea and gold forest” but over the

last

few years, sparse vegetation gradually.

Thus

, people here have got many troubles with natural disaster and respiratory diseases. A solution is for the government to provide strict rules

and punishments not

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and punishments, not

only to protect the forests but

also

encourage people planning trees. In conclusion, current environmental problems make us vulnerable to disasters and tragedies, now and in the future. We are in a state of planetary emergency, with environmental problems piling up high around us. People need to join

hand

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hands

with safeguarding our planet for a brighter future.