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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays social media are
became
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becoming
 the main
interaction
 reducing the relation face-to-face among many people. In
this
 essay, I will discuss about some advantages and disadvantages of
this
 new way of
interaction
 and why the pros outweigh the cons. Social media give the
possibility
 to meet people with less time than traditional
interaction
 among people, overall in new generations.
However
 apps which give the
possibility
 to have a relation with other people are growing faster because they are comfortable as regards the reduction of distance,
for example
, you have the
possibility
 to stay in contact with people from all over the world without
take
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taking
 a plane.
In addition
, in my opinion Social media allow the contact between those people who do not have the
possibility
 to leave home or hospital, as, invalid persons or who suffers of a terminal problem and
this
 is a pro.
On the other hand
, the traditional way to interact is useful among children in fact, they have to learn the importance of people relations, and I feel as if Social media are overused by them. Indeed, I suggest that schools have to pass through with children a
path
something determined in relation to something that includes it
part
 of information behind social media
also
 because they have and will have a
fix
Suggestion
fixed
 place in the world, and Social media can be very dangerous as regards the formation of relations in children. Another cons with the
interaction
in
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with
 Social media is that there is the
possibility
 to know new
people but
Accept comma addition
people, but
 they can be fake and people on the other screen
could
assign a specified (usually proper) proper name to
called
 "pay" the consequences of
this
, but
this
can be avoid
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can be avoided
 with a good knowledge of social media.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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