The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays social media are

became

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becoming

the main

interaction

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reducing the relation face-to-face among many people. In

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essay, I will discuss about some advantages and disadvantages of

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new way of

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and why the pros outweigh the cons. Social media give the

possibility

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to meet people with less time than traditional

interaction

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among people, overall in new generations.

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apps which give the

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to have a relation with other people are growing faster because they are comfortable as regards the reduction of distance,

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, you have the

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to stay in contact with people from all over the world without

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taking

a plane.

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, in my opinion Social media allow the contact between those people who do not have the

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to leave home or hospital, as, invalid persons or who suffers of a terminal problem and

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is a pro.

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, the traditional way to interact is useful among children in fact, they have to learn the importance of people relations, and I feel as if Social media are overused by them. Indeed, I suggest that schools have to pass through with children a

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of information behind social media

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because they have and will have a

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fixed

place in the world, and Social media can be very dangerous as regards the formation of relations in children. Another cons with the

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with

Social media is that there is the

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to know new

people but

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people, but

they can be fake and people on the other screen

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assign a specified (usually proper) proper name to

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"pay" the consequences of

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, but

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can be avoid

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can be avoided

with a good knowledge of social media.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

face-to-face interaction
geographical barriers
global community
cultural diversity
economic opportunities
superficial interactions
mental health impact
loneliness
depression
interpersonal relationships
real world
spread of misinformation
echo chambers
societal polarization
informed citizenship
constant connectivity
maintain relationships
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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Translation software are now accessible, people still thinks learning a language can be advantageous.

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