In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

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Gender equality is of

parmount

having superior power and influence

paramount

importance in the

world

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today. In the contemporary

world

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today, both men and women indulge in professional duties whole day.

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, it is important to divide chores at

home

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equally when they return back from hectic hours of the day. I strongly agree with

this

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statement, as it is completely logical and systematic which is actually required in

this

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industrialised

world

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. To embark on, with the escalating IT sector in the modernized era,

citizens are employed

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citizens, employ

citizens employ

full

time

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irrespective of being male or female.

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, the

work

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pressure and stress

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are

huge. At the end of the tiring day,

every body

all people

everybody

would be exhausted and would have no strength to carry out the household works. It is a tradition from the past that only women are supposed to do all the tasks at

home

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, because decades back, females did not go out

for

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work

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like men.

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, it would be justified for them to complete all the household requirements.

On the other hand

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, the scenario has tremendously changed now, as women empowerment is the pressing issue in the society and they have got equal rights and opportunities to

work

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like men.

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, it is important to share

work

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home

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when they return back.

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, women are physically weaker compared to their men counterparts. When they try to compete in the outside

world

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they would definitely require enormous support from their families both physically and psychologically. By providing a helping hand in tasks like dish washing, mopping the floor, taking care of children at

home

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or even cooking would benefit a female tremendously.

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, she would absolutely feel delighted for the support given by

husband

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the husband

and would have great respect towards him. And

also

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, when more people help,

work

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gets done faster and they might

also

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find some personal

time

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to interact and make their emotional bonding stronger.

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, it is vital for men and women to share their duties.

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, a research states that, 86% of the families in the UK are living prosperously and the main reason behind is the equality

among

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between

husband and wife by giving support to each other whenever required. To conclude, in the era of globalization, every individual would fight for their rights. Women are given equal opportunities as men in their workplace and

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it is necessary as well as logical to share their duties at

home

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Furthermore

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this

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would reduce the stress and would provide ample space and

time

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for

themselves

objective case of they

them

to have good communication and personal

time

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Therefore

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refers to the speaker or writer

strongly incline towards gender equality and no discrimination towards chores which has to be done at their residence.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

441 words

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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

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