You are visiting another town next month for a short break. write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: Tell them how long you are staying Ask for some suggestion for what to do Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

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Dear Sir, I am trying to get some advice about getting the best out of my

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visit to your town, as I am planning to visit your location at the end of February for two weeks from the 14th to 28th. During my stay I would like to visit some interesting tourist sites, but

first

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of all what kind of accommodation would you recommend? I will be travelling alone

this

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time and do not have a car to move around,

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however

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I would like to stay in the central town at a

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price if possible. Preferably, somewhere close to the bus or train station for easy access would be good.

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, would there be any special events going on between the dates I will be visiting?

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a friend of mine told me about an interesting English drama live show that holds every 20th of each month at the city centre cinema,

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I am not in the mood of going to a foreign show

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period, as I would prefer an African local drama show

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. Please Kindly find out how much it would cost to get a ticket for that. I look forward to hearing your candid suggestions to enable me to plan my trip ahead of time to get the most out of my stay. Thank you for your time Julia

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

227 words

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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: Tell them how long you are staying Ask for some suggestion for what to do Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

The Closing

In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being placed on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from text books or other sources. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do a different kind of jobs. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this becom a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

Students in some countries leave school without good understanding of how to manage their money. What do you think are the reasons? What are the solutions to this problem?