The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Number of cars on British roads may increase in millions by the year 2020 as it was very
few
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little
in 1980’s. Introducing international laws to maintain vehicle ownership and other suitable ways of transportation should be promoted. It is advantageous because it helps to reduce traffic on the road as well as provide other more benefits
to
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of
country
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the country
. On the one hand, if people use public transporting rather than their own vehicle, it allows people to reach their destination on time because it saves that time which is consumed by the long traffic jams.
Furthermore
, it
also provide
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also provides
safety
to
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for
individuals and helps to minimise the threat of accidents.
For example
,
Accept space
,
in
UK
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the UK
the rate of road accidents reduced by 20%
as compare
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as compared
to
last
year because of the fact that most of the people turned toward the metro.
On the other hand
,
firstly
it
reduce
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reduces
the pollution in the country because the main cause of pollution is emission of burning fuels which produced by vehicles so reduction in the number of vehicles running on
road
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the road
leads to less pollution and give healthy environmental life to the nation.
Secondly
also
government can generate income through passenger buses which adds value to
country’s GDP
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the country’s GDP
a country’s GDP
.
For instance
, according to The Hindu Times report recently New Delhi improves its air quality level
in contrast
of
last
decade because now CM of the state bans own vehicles on roads. To conclude
this
, it would be a positive development when public of the nation turn towards other means of transportation which promote
healthy and safe environment
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a healthy and safe environment
to
nation
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the nation
nations
as well as
also
benefits the government in financial aspects.
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