An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What are the causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, more and more professional from underdeveloped countries are choosing to live in richer countries. The migration will lead to problems
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as the skills shortage and economic stagnation in their native countries. Increasing the salary scale and better houses as well as facilities is the only ways to retain the talent One of the major problems caused by brain-drain is a shortage of skilled professionals in poorer countries to achieve economic development and their living standards of their poor countries
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Due to lack of these skills these citizens faces more problem
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as education and medical fields for instances , a recent survey by world health organisation stated that underdeveloped countries molarity rate is high due to shortage of doctors
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they depend on foreign medical aid
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costs them billion dollars and economic stability issues to illustrate in 2011 the economy of venezula is almost fall asleep due high amount of spending in foreign trade technical aid.
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improve employmental and education fields in conclusion,skilled people living their native place lack of payscale and better living conditions unfourtunately it migrates the development of mother land so to stop
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government should provide special schemes and employement opportunities for youth
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Skilled labor
  • Developed nations
  • Essential services
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Economic impact
  • Social impact
  • Migration
  • Inequality
  • Disparity
  • Foreign aid
  • Investment
  • Community
  • Dependency
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