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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Which is the best? Individual or party studying? There are a lot of disputes in our community. I think class learning is better than alone sittings. Is there any difference between methods of studying? Yes, of course. So, let’s start with
benefits
Suggestion
the benefits
 and limitations of personal approach. Benefits:
Firstly
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,
student
Suggestion
the student
 will have own education program. If pupil didn’t understand some topic, he can replay the lessons without limits, until he realized.
Secondly
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, people who in one-on-one sittings can choose own timetable.
For example
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, if they have important meetings or some problems with health, they will be able to transfer their lessons. But, what about disadvantages of
this
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 method?
Pupil
Suggestion
The pupil
A pupil
have not got
Suggestion
has not gotten
has not got
 a lot of practice with other, so
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 influence very bad for his vocabulary and communicating skills. When you alone with
teacher
Suggestion
the teacher
a teacher
 is very difficult to
do not
Accept comma addition
do, not
 miss your motivation. Why not go
further
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? Class learning system. Nowadays, we have a lot of education
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 where only group sessions. On the one hand, you will be able to speak with everyone and it’s
do
Suggestion
doing
your
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
 socialize ability impressive. You can find sea of motivation and friends.
That is
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 why I prefer
this
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 technique.
On the other hand
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,
Accept space
,
 you have not got your individual timetable. Certainly, sometimes you need it. In conclusion, I prefer
joint teaching system
Suggestion
a joint teaching system
joint teaching systems
, because plenty of practice and friends. But, if you want to get high outcomes it does not matter do you analyse alone or with friends.
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