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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior

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Nowadays people are thinking that
education
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educators
 need to progress an individual
lessons
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lesson
. There is
also
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 another part of society who think differently: that
group
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 lessons are better. I prefer one-on-one lessons, they have a lot of advantages, but everyone says that
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 kind of lessons has
wider range
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a wider range
 of abilities to create. On the one hand individual lessons
are enable
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enable
 to students to work
in
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on
 professionalized pace, which is progressive. In the
classroom students
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classroom, students
 either fall behind or get easily bored, because it's hard or opposite easy to understand
theme
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the theme
. A tutor can look after his student and his study progress and tailor lessons
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.
This
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 could give a situation where a student who's gifted at chemistry progress well beyond the grade level. And of they struggle in another subject,
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 as physics, a Grade 7 aged student could effectively be studying Grade 6 Physics and Grade 9 Chemistry at the same time.
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 kind of pacing is only possible with one-on-one lessons
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hand
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hand, group
group
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lessons open
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lessons, open
 up opportunities for a collaboration in and outside the classroom. Groups have a many lively and informative discussions. Students and teachers can exchange views, learn more and plurality of perspectives.
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 revealed when working on a project, which is very important for educational indicators. A purpose of
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projects
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project
 is that students must improve their teamwork skills by getting along with classmates, taking on responsibility for given
tasks learning
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tasks, learning
 to compromise z and managing different temperaments. Many schools today assign roles within teams
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 as team leader, presenter primary researcher and so on. These collaborated projects can be brought into a
group
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 lesson and debated. In conclusion
group
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 lessons are a better way to learn. It's important that educators do not blindly follow the latest academic fads and
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 carefully analysis the consequence before making a drastic
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reform
 to
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establish
educational
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education
 practices.

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