Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior

#people #lessons #group

Nowadays people are thinking that

education

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educators

need to progress an individual

lessons

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lesson

. There is

also

another part of society who think differently: that

group

lessons are better. I prefer one-on-one lessons, they have a lot of advantages, but everyone says that

this

kind of lessons has

wider range

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a wider range

of abilities to create. On the one hand individual lessons

are enable

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enable

to students to work

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professionalized pace, which is progressive. In the

classroom students

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classroom, students

either fall behind or get easily bored, because it's hard or opposite easy to understand

theme

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the theme

. A tutor can look after his student and his study progress and tailor lessons

accordingly

This

could give a situation where a student who's gifted at chemistry progress well beyond the grade level. And of they struggle in another subject,

such

as physics, a Grade 7 aged student could effectively be studying Grade 6 Physics and Grade 9 Chemistry at the same time.

This

kind of pacing is only possible with one-on-one lessons

On the other

hand

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hand, group

group

lessons open

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lessons, open

up opportunities for a collaboration in and outside the classroom. Groups have a many lively and informative discussions. Students and teachers can exchange views, learn more and plurality of perspectives.

This

revealed when working on a project, which is very important for educational indicators. A purpose of

this

projects

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project

is that students must improve their teamwork skills by getting along with classmates, taking on responsibility for given

tasks learning

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tasks, learning

to compromise z and managing different temperaments. Many schools today assign roles within teams

such

as team leader, presenter primary researcher and so on. These collaborated projects can be brought into a

group

lesson and debated. In conclusion

group

lessons are a better way to learn. It's important that educators do not blindly follow the latest academic fads and

instead

carefully analysis the consequence before making a drastic

reforms

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reform

established

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establish

educational

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education

practices.

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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior

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