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Nowadays more and more people choose living separately from their families. What are its causes and consequences?

#people #families #consequences
We live in an age when many of us really hurry up becoming
grow
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grown
up but
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up, but
 not in case with
age but
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age, but
 in case of gaining independence and freedom of action. The most common way it can be reached by living
separately
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separated
 from their relatives.
However
, there are not only advantages but disadvantages of
this
 approach to life. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision. To my
way of thinking living
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way of thinking, living
 alone or with your friends has many benefits to you. To communicate with your buddy
is
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has been
 often more comfortable.
Likewise
, you’re better feeling each other cause there is no generation gap. Some people have a barrier to discuss something with their parents. In the same way sometimes you just need a rest after work/studying which you can’t get if you live in huge family. In normal life I live with my parents, but when I studied abroad, I was living in a dormitory during 6 months alone. I did whatever I wanted and needed and nobody distracted me. I had silence atmosphere after
long work day
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a long work day
, and that was awesome.
On the contrary
, there are significant drawbacks. One of them a lack of care. No one will take care of you as family. When I had an exchange program in England during one year I wasn’t bored cause I had a lot of new friends and height networking and many activities, but I was missing conversations with my mother and her hugs.
Also I
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Also, I
 should had spent time for cooking and washing, the things, which was
mom’s
informal term for a mother
mamas
 at home. And all of us sometimes need a quality advice, which I get by talking to my family. In conclusion, I would like to say, that’s it so important to keep in touch with your family always, even if you live separately. No one is closer to you
then
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than
 family, even if they are far from away.
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