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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Majority
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A majority
The majority
believe
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believes
 that studying in
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group
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a group
the group
groups
 is more
useful whereas
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useful, whereas
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 think that private studying is much better. I would emphasize in
group
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 educating. Nowadays there are loads of student who prefers to study alone because they think that in
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 case have a lengthy opportunity for learning in any place. May be some people want to learn in environments or own room, certainly without any noises it can help to be full attention approximately high percent. Another interesting point is that, students may control study schedule it means when the students live in hall residence, they afford to work in their free time and after that work process they can come and carry on studying maybe online or offline educating.
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, there is no doubt that some students would prefer to choose
group
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 training.
Group
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 learning can help improve social development. The student will get on well with his classmates. Any issue questions may appear during the lesson which relate to the lesson. In
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 case, they can discuss to find a solution to the problem together.
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 can affect how to express widely mental outlook. Students will learn to support each other when someone has problems. May show up
motivation atmosphere
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the motivation atmosphere
 between in students who want to
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
 great mark and it leads to amazing struggle in groups. In conclusion, it should be noted that
group
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 training has more effectively than independent training. Social development and a sense of responsibility always play a role in a successful life. These factors are involved in
group
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 studying.
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